Forever mine- Vampire Love poem

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By nighthag

Moving together so close to my heart

I can almost feel it again beat

As our lips so gently part

Your breath soft and sweet


Your warm skin pressed against mine

Your beautiful eyes full of trust

Into my hand your fingers entwine

No sigh of fear or disgust


For the monster you hold in your arms

No flinching at the dark sight

No cry of alarm

For your vampire of the night


With your blood stained on my lips

I stare with possessive eyes

Amazed at your willing kiss

To follow this love unwise


Nestled with your head on my shoulder

I swear I will be more than you need

Soldier, protector and lover

For you I would truly bleed


I could be anything you asked me to be

give anything to see you shine

Just spend eternity with me

Be forever mine

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always exploring Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Well i guess even a Vampire likes to send a Valentine..I loved this..Very clever and sensual...Thank you..Happy Valentine..

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poetvix Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

Oh, how I have missed dark poetry of late having been bitten by the political bug. This is darkly delicious and steamy too...Better than hot chocolate!

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Vincent Moore Level 7 Commenter 3 months ago

Beautifully expressed, your words heated up my blood and I felt the nearness of these two lovers of the dark. Very sensual indeed. Loved it and yes poetvix, shelve the politics for awhile you to are a magnificent scribe of dark poetry, so let your pen flow with red on to the page before you of white. Yes bloody but still better than hot chocolate. Voted Up and awesome my scribe of the night.

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LABrashear Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

Beautiful and yes, sensual. Definitely voting up-as Always Exploring referred to it- the Vampire Valentine.

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nighthag Hub Author 3 months ago

always exploring

Even monsters want to celebrate the finer things of life, and the vampire is not to be left out :)

so glad you enjoyed this

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nighthag Hub Author 3 months ago

poetvix

Ah the lure of the dark side never leaves us long, I am sure your dark muse is not done with you yet, she is just being patient letting you explore other things until she is ready to claim you again

I am thrilled that you liked this, Better than hot chocolate is quite a compliment

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nighthag Hub Author 3 months ago

Vincent Moore

Always a pleasure to have you visit, and with such words of compliments your endless support simply blows me away and there are no words that will ever express it enough.

Thank you!

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nighthag Hub Author 3 months ago

LABrashear

Vampire Valentine, I have to admit that has a nice ring to it :)

I am so very very glad that you liked it, thank you so much for taking the time to let me know what you thought :)

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Nikkij504gurl Level 6 Commenter 3 months ago

I wish someone would want me that way, someone that I want the same. so much passion and love, vampires are the true romantics.

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blaise25 Level 4 Commenter 3 months ago

You know I need to meet a vampire before I die. :p This is so beautiful

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Erin LeFey Level 4 Commenter 3 months ago

How beautiful and sensual...I dreamed of this on Valentine's Day, like poetvix - I miss writing like this. I love the dark and beautiful poetry, beautiful verse nighthag. Erin

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thelyricwriter Level 8 Commenter 3 months ago

Up, awesome, and interesting votes. Love the first lines!

"I can almost feel it beat again". That was awesome. You truly have a gift. To me, it is like each line makes you want more and more. Great job. Have a great one and see you soon.

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nighthag Hub Author 3 months ago

Nikkij504gurl

It would indeed be a intense love that I can only imagine would be a bit overwhealming, but I dont know a woman who dosnt crave it :)

blaise25

Oh I couldnt agree with you more, meeting a dark sexy vampire would be a dream come true :)

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nighthag Hub Author 3 months ago

Erin LeFey

thank you so very much for such a lovely comment, coming from a writer I enjoy so much it is indeed a compliment.

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nighthag Hub Author 3 months ago

thelyricwriter

thank you so very much! It is a true pleasure to share my writing with those who enjoy it . Thank you so very much for your words of encouragement you have truly made my day :)

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QudsiaP1 Level 5 Commenter 2 months ago

Absolutely lovely and sensual. Wonderful nighthag!

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nighthag Hub Author 2 months ago

QudaiaP1

Oh thank you so very much!, I am so thrilled that you enjoyed it

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